Murderthane teaser splash page

I decided to attempt to knock Gabe's socks off by going balls out and making a 2 page splash instead of just a normal splash page. I spent a couple hours in the badass zone trying o make this page my bitch as it were, but am not entirely pleased with it. I'll go back and mess with it some more, but I figured I'd post this now as I wont get another chance to scan it etc til monday.
The pencils are very light so I tweaked the levels so you could see it on the screen.